Hey guys! I am trying my hand at poetry for the first time. I haven’t followed any rules so feedback would be nice. I hope you like it.
Getting out of the Desert
In the plains of the desert, I find an oasis
I quench my thirst, attract a deadly sepsis
Look into the clear pool to see my eyes red
I am afraid I might soon be dead.
I turn and see a man, my father in the light
He says, “Its not your time go back, do it right!”
I wake up in a nomad’s shabby little yurt
Reminded me of how bad I was hurt
I gave my father my word
My path has drifted like a herd
I owe him a life lived well
I lost my way in this desert of hell
Its beautiful I tell you, this desert
Its mirage is deceitful, yet covert
It reigns you in, mesmerises you
Disappears into thin air as you get closer
Leaves you wondering and none the wiser
In this desert I strayed as a prey
Thinking I was a hunter to my dismay
I seek solace in the path I chose
My word to my father remains far from close
Must I keep my word? Does it matter?
What will I do when I see my father?
I couldn’t do what he asked of me
I couldn’t be the man he wanted me to be
He said, “Go back do it right!”
The nomad shows me the way to fight
This desert may be distress in daylight
It’s a hunter’s paradise during the night.
I hunt at night and make my way
Out of the desert to the ocean’s bay
I do it right like my father used to say
I get out and live to see another day.







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